Thursday, May 12, 2016

I am proud I am poem because it is my personal best and it took a while to think about the I am. 
I am…
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Leave the reader thinking about your poem by sharing what it inside you

I am different
I wonder if I will ever be a policewoman
I hear lots of people talking  and chattering
I see all my friends all the time
I want to go a lot faster on the softball field
I am different
I pretend I am a mistletoe, apple and a rose
I feel glad that I’ve got my puppy Milly
I touch Milly’s soft pink blanket
I worry about my granddad every day and me at school  
I cry when people die
I am different
I understand what my teachers say when they talk
I say good morning to mum every morning when I wake up
I dream of teddy bears and my family
I try to be the best I can be at everything
I hope I get better at tenpin bowling
I am different

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