Character Descrition
I am blogging this because...I have done my personal best and thought about what I should write.
We were learning about how to write a character description on someone
Cameron Buge
Physical Description
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Character Traits
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Actions
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Loves to play the drums.
Has one wife and two sons.
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understanding.
helpful.
kind.
nice.
friendly.
cool.
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picks up drum sticks.
wokes around the room (longe).
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WALT choose words that give the reader a vivid picture in their head
Purpose: To Entertain
Text Type: Character Description
My Writing Goal: Sentences make sense with punctuation in the correct places.
Success Criteria:
- Shows physical description
- Shows character traits and actions
- Organised into correct sentences and paragraphs - intro / physical / traits / actions / ending
- Strong nouns, verbs and adjectives
- Uses a good simile and can use other language features effectively
- Has an entertaining anecdote (little story that happened) about the character
Mr M’s modelling is on next page
Mr Gifkins AKA Mr G
Mr G is not your normal principal, he is one of the most cheerful principals you’d ever meet. Come on down to Parkvale School and you will be in for a treat. If you see Mr G walking down any path at our school, he’ll make you feel welcome.
CAMERON BUDGE
Cameron Budge is my drumming teacher.When I go for my lesson he walks around the room (lounge) and teaches me what to do. He has been drumming since he was 9 years old and has a wife and two sons.He loves to play the drums he is very cool and he is really understanding.He loves drumming like I do.
He is always kind and nice and he is letting me call him want ever I want so I’m calling him Cam.Tomorrow was my drumming lesson but he has gone away for a holiday so I have him next week.
He is helpful and friendly.He picks up the drumsticks he also has his own drum kit as well. We both have a duet together on the 2nd of December 2015 in the cabana.
He is the best drummer teacher I have ever had.
By Rosie Keene
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